This is an example of my writing using adverbs.
Summer
Quickly the Jacks ran to the sand on the warm beach. ARRR a crab came by when I was walking on the sandy beach. Slowly we walked along the grassy area to pick some beautiful flowers. "Yay!" I yelled, "ice cream time." We waddled up to the the ice-cream stall with a shelter on top. Wawawa! Unfortunately as I was walking back to the beach my ice-cream melted like a snowman shrinking in the sun.
I hate it when my icecream melts like a snowman in the sun Kate. Well done on this writing.
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