Writing

this is my  unassisted recount that I did this week. We didn’t get any help from the teacher. We have Here is made copies so that our friends can help  us improve them.

Term 1 2016  Personal Recount Sample                                            Name: Kate

Title: Paihai

Paragraph Plan: finding out. Exploring Dinner

Mum why are you clean up the car I yelled in a confusing way. Are we going somewhere I shouted before she got to say something. Yes we are mum said where I questioned to russell on a fairy mum answered. Yay!!! I yelled with excitement we are on our way. Yay!!! I shouted we are here now dad when are we going on the ferry to russell I don’t know yet Kate dad yelled ok a few hours later dad when are we going I shouted to dad we aren’t going any more but why dad I whispered to dad because it pays money for there and back oh then what will we do instead. Have takeaways and an ice cream dad yelled to the whole family. Yay!!! I shouted with excitement. The end