Te Ahuahu walk

Here is my published recount about our walk up Te Ahuahu mountain. Bob and Kevin helped me edit it. I want you to notice that I used a simile.

Yippee!!! I yelled with excitement we can finally go to Te AhuAhu.  Does anyone want

to buddy up with one of these little kids shouted Mrs Craig.

I put my hand up Mrs B chose me and budded up with Heidi Lilly's little sister. Heidi

grabbed my hand then we ran then Lily Came in with Marco then Lilly budded up with me and Heidi then the bus drove to the mountain Te Ahu Ahu.

Yay!!! we’re here Mrs Tatum opened the gate we started walking up the mountain I then started to get hot I took off my top and left my singlet on.

Hurry up guys Heidi yelled in a energetic way. Finally we got up the mountain wow look at the view  it's better than viewing an enchanted city.

I never want to climb that mountain again.

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